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Subject: Re: The Gift on the Common

Author:
Max Hardy

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Date Posted: 02:24:36 12/04/07 Tue
In reply to: thesongman 's message, "The Gift on the Common" on 13:39:10 11/27/07 Tue

Hello Bill

Such a visual treat, wrapping up a life lesson which we should all embrace. In amongst that thing most of us do call life, you've captured the mellow of what is really real.

Wonderful my friend, just wonderful.

Max

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tcn
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Date Posted: 10:10:32 12/26/07 Wed

I love the structure of this piece! the then and now:) Which goes so well with the underlying theme. I love how you are able to take us to the scene of the action with such ease and how you allow your readers to not only get into and experience the psyche of your characters but of the author as well. You never lose focus and the progression of your story unfolds with such brilliance. I also loved..."He spoke of a truth which was encompassed by acts of kindness and love"...An amazing piece! Excellent writing! Spiritually uplifting. Always a pleasure!

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