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Subject: Re: The Porch

Author:
tcn

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Date Posted: 21:09:41 10/06/07 Sat
In reply to: andy spaschak 's message, "The Porch" on 08:03:47 10/04/07 Thu

This is beautiful Andy. And I agree with the sentiment about porches:)Your story made me feel like I was safe and home, filed with serenity and love. I loved the vivid descriptions..whiskey bottle tucked at the hip... Well done!

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Sasha
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Date Posted: 21:06:33 10/20/07 Sat

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The elm tree stood proud rising above the rooftop shading the house from the eastern sun its twisted trunk groaning on occasion like an old man defiant leaking the signs of aging.

If not for a steady gaze you might miss the porch that wrapped itself around the home of generations, of sitters and talkers, sippers and sinners, come and gone.

~ this is such an enchanting opening to this piece, Andz

I absolutely love the imagery and the character of the tree, the porch, and Uncle Bill.....there is such a serenity in your voice in this one...beautifully written, dear one

*kiwi hugs*

Sash xx

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