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Subject: Lament of a loon - nonet


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 23:24:53 11/07/07 Wed

Lament of a loon
(nonet)


A
midnight
loon whimpers
as she swims through
moonlight reflections,
she waits for a response
but hears nothing but echoes
of her own melancholic song,
the moon darkens as she swims away.

© jah
7-30-06


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Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 02:47:06 11/08/07 Thu


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~ oh wow...Janel, sweetie, this is such a beautifully haunting piece

your imagery is just fantastic

I'm so taken by this Nonet...you rock!!!!!!


*hugs*

Sash xx

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[> [> Subject: Re: Lament of a loon - nonet


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:35:13 11/13/07 Tue

So glad you liked this sweet Sasha (huggs) I truly appreciate you.

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[> Subject: Re: Lament of a loon - nonet


Author:
Jessica
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Date Posted: 20:27:32 11/14/07 Wed

I love this piece! Form poetry can be so hard, but this was beautifully evocative. Luv it!

Jess

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[> Subject: Re: Lament of a loon - nonet


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 08:49:11 11/24/07 Sat



Oh, this one just paints such a soft
and lovely picture.

You did well my friend!

Such a treat to stop in here
and find these gems today.

big hugs,
andy

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