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Subject: Broken Arrow (Quatern)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 03:19:56 11/08/07 Thu

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Broken Arrow


How high flies the broken arrow
when thunder cuts the night in half
and sky eyes chase the running flame
across the land of elves and men


burnt edged keeper of secrets knows
how high flies the broken arrow
for the crimson tide bathed the land
as flesh and steel were brought to bare


his kingdom fades within the mist
the sun ebbs on his northern heart
how high flies the broken arrow
across the far off broken plains



death’s sweet sleep to his side may come
the call of will, the ancient ones
warrior mine, what knowledge gleaned
how high flies the broken arrow





© Sasha ‘06




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[> Subject: Re: Broken Arrow (Quatern)


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:33:07 11/13/07 Tue

I really enjoyed this Sasha,
truly is very beautiful, magical too.. jus love it. huggs

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[> Subject: Re: Broken Arrow (Quatern)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 01:07:03 11/18/07 Sun






~ thank you dear Janel....

this was the first of 2 pieces I wrote in this poetry form - it's called Kyrielle..

your visit to this poem is a blessing, hon..thank you so much

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: Broken Arrow (Quatern)


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 08:47:43 11/24/07 Sat



For some reason Sash your form poetry
just shines and brings out your
amazing talent and ability to paint
pictures with words that leap off
of the page.

So very well done!

thanks,
andy

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Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 13:35:24 11/26/07 Mon




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~ this is the picture that inspired this piece :)

((((Andz)))) you smile my heart, my dear friend...

this is actually a really lovely form to work with, so it was a pleasure to write this poem, but it's such a cool bonus that you enjoyed reading it....thanks for reading me here, smiley

*warm hugs*

Sash xx




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