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Subject: Re: Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn Author: Sasha [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 22:30:28 12/07/07 Fri In reply to: Jessica 's message, "Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn" on 09:19:45 11/27/07 Tue Quote: __________________________________________________ And you offered me snow. For purification, I thought, to become again pristine, and bye-the-bye I was scoured by your rough arctic winds, and came to understand the tundra is also a desert and the bite of frost is the only kiss the Aurora Borealis have for me. __________________________________________________ ~ *sighhh* now THAT is gorgeous!!! I've written one Sestina, and don't think I'll be doing another one, as I found the form just a little too limiting for me...but I was glad I got 1 written, just to say I've done one..lol. This poem may not be completely true to how I understand the form to be, but it is just such a beautiful piece of poetry, I absolutely love your poetic voice, my friend, and we are blessed to have you here... loving this lots!!! *hugs* Sash xx . [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> Subject: Re: Tropics of Cancer and Capricorn Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 16:18:48 12/10/07 Mon Hello Jessica First, the tale, wrought through the passage of a love tropics apart, tugged my heart as I read, and left me hollow, and wanting so much more for her. Second, the form, i'm just learning of, and am lapping in your construct in lessons of understanding, for me though, the tale and the form so well matched. Thank you for the teaching. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ]