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Author: andy (Three Part Haiku) | [ Next Thread |
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] Date Posted: 15:59:50 10/16/07 Tue center  Write a three part inverted Haiku based on your perception of this photograph. Three part inverted haiku formula: numbers represent syllable count. 5-7-5 paragraph 7-5-7 paragraph 5-7-5 written like a sonnet where the final stanza would resemble a closing finish (couplet) to the poem. If I am the only one who responds to this challenge I must conclude I am surrounded by gutless foes. LOL How's that for reverse phychology? Bang a Gong! andy [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:46:52 10/16/07 Tue Into the night. The horizon calls, Harley throbbing to my heart, Tears fall from my eyes, She did not see my leaving, Not that she would care, Her legs wrapped round her lover, I burn the highway, The gas tank soon to empty, Like my broken heart, © Paul Osborne 2007 [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:05:27 10/16/07 Tue wow! I was busting balls about me being the only one to jump in here and now I don't know how i can start from scratch without being influenced by you take on things. Life is like that-- poetry even more so! Well Done! andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:12:56 10/16/07 Tue ~ omg Paulie...I will say it again, you, hon, can write!!! this is awesome.. I'll have a go at mine, tonight *kiwi hugs* Sash xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 22:15:57 10/16/07 Tue Leading Me Home the long road waits now ribboned tresses glisten jet to beckon me home when the soft winds leave my soul gently will I twine the infinite kiss of white softly, darkly hushed where all roads meet and release where you are, my heart TR ;) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:19:12 10/17/07 Wed .  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:11:02 10/17/07 Wed Street Stomping white lines lead me home roads can be hypnotizing four hours feels like two in the space between the lines the road bleeds to black while the moon reflects my soul accelerating as the wind blows back my hair radio blaring ajs [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Shalah [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:39:23 10/22/07 Mon Destiny Awaits The heat waves press in. Reality is a blur out on the fringes. The road calls me on to where the sky touches earth with bright clarity. There, beyond that hill my destiny waits... I will continue. ~Shalah [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 07:36:03 10/25/07 Thu Shalah, What a surprise! You win this challenge! I officially close it and move your poem to the lobby. Wow, never expected to find this here and thinking about how your words relate to your life the poem for me becomes quite profound. Congrats-- on your coming award! love ya, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |