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Subject: Re: New Challenge

Author:
andy

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Date Posted: 09:11:02 10/17/07 Wed
In reply to: andy 's message, "New Challenge" on 15:59:50 10/16/07 Tue

Street Stomping

white lines lead me home
roads can be hypnotizing
four hours feels like two

in the space between the lines
the road bleeds to black
while the moon reflects my soul

accelerating
as the wind blows back my hair
radio blaring

ajs

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[> Subject: Re: New Challenge
Author: Shalah [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 15:39:23 10/22/07 Mon Destiny Awaits The heat waves press in. Reality is a blur out on the fringes. The road calls me on to where the sky touches earth with bright clarity. There, beyond that hill my destiny waits... I will continue. ~Shalah [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> [> Subject: Re: New Challenge
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 07:36:03 10/25/07 Thu Shalah, What a surprise! You win this challenge! I officially close it and move your poem to the lobby. Wow, never expected to find this here and thinking about how your words relate to your life the poem for me becomes quite profound. Congrats-- on your coming award! love ya, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]