Re: Brand New Challenge!!!!!! -- Poetry Challenge Court

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Subject: Re: Brand New Challenge!!!!!!

Author:
Jessica (....Dark.)

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Date Posted: 13:18:05 11/06/07 Tue
In reply to: Sasha 's message, "Brand New Challenge!!!!!!" on 03:58:23 11/05/07 Mon

My addition. Tell me whatcha think!

Pale girl,
don�t scream loudly
so-it isn�t a deeper
pit than love. The rocks not so sharp,
not so

lusty
for your blood and
tears as I, your
jealous green lover. The
crows not so starved for your flesh
as I,

the clouds
not so eager
to enfold and caress
and steal away the breath from your
fairy lips

as I,
your torturer,
your lover, your devil,
your captor, your saviour. Love, scream
louder.

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Author: Jess (Sheepish) [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 19:55:57 11/06/07 Tue I just realised that I have an extra 4 syllable line in there. Ah, well. Imperfection is the soul of beauty. I'll let it stand. Maybe it'll be a new variation hereafter named for me? ;) [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 15:12:39 11/07/07 Wed ~ Warm Welcomes to the M3, Jessica so lovely to see you take up the challenge :) Andy and Sasha [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 16:12:03 11/07/07 Wed

Well, I think that your poem is just fine.
It's filled with both passion and emotion.

Poetry is LIFE!

Life itself can be quite dark so that means
there is room for Dark Poetry.

Dark, Light, Evil, Benevolent, Inspirational,
Angry, Loving, Seductive, you name it, and
you will find countless poems covering it all.

Thanks again for joining us.

It's our policy to move these poems into our lobby
once they are placed here.

I will be doing that now.

Welcome!

thanks,
andy

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