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] Date Posted: 14:57:36 11/05/07 Mon In reply to: Sasha 's message, "Brand New Challenge!!!!!!" on 03:58:23 11/05/07 Mon Reaching desperately toward the outstretched hand. Fingers barely missing flesh on flesh... Again. Moon beams filter softly beautifully deceiving through the curtain of sheerly hung clouds. Futile. If she could only reach into the abyss below. Could she but grasp those fragile fingers... Insight. Inches seperate her from the truth that lies below. She will believe that hand is reaching for her. A leap of childlike faith would shatter the surface. Realities reflection revealed at last. The hand she longs to reach... It was her own outstretched. Sometimes an inch is simply more than space. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Jessica (....Dark.) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:18:05 11/06/07 Tue My addition. Tell me whatcha think! Pale girl, don’t scream loudly so-it isn’t a deeper pit than love. The rocks not so sharp, not so lusty for your blood and tears as I, your jealous green lover. The crows not so starved for your flesh as I, the clouds not so eager to enfold and caress and steal away the breath from your fairy lips as I, your torturer, your lover, your devil, your captor, your saviour. Love, scream louder. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Jess (Sheepish) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:55:57 11/06/07 Tue I just realised that I have an extra 4 syllable line in there. Ah, well. Imperfection is the soul of beauty. I'll let it stand. Maybe it'll be a new variation hereafter named for me? ;) [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 15:12:39 11/07/07 Wed  ~ Warm Welcomes to the M3, Jessica so lovely to see you take up the challenge :) Andy and Sasha  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 16:12:03 11/07/07 Wed Well, I think that your poem is just fine. It's filled with both passion and emotion. Poetry is LIFE! Life itself can be quite dark so that means there is room for Dark Poetry. Dark, Light, Evil, Benevolent, Inspirational, Angry, Loving, Seductive, you name it, and you will find countless poems covering it all. Thanks again for joining us. It's our policy to move these poems into our lobby once they are placed here. I will be doing that now. Welcome! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |