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Subject: Malady


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 13:55:33 12/02/07 Sun

I know the way, this way, your way
through the direction of your voice

your wind song rises to eat my sun
and i am wired to your yearnings

but the words i need to give you
fall away the closer i get, the more i listen

i cannot hear the waves anymore
i am a conduit of the pain you sing

in the dark recesses of the malady you serve
i cannot reach you, i cannot reach you

teach me




~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Stephanie
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Date Posted: 19:50:02 12/02/07 Sun

(((LILY)))

First off, WELCOME TO THE MOTEL! It's nice to meet you. I believe this is the first I have read from you and I can't wait to read more. *smile and hugs*

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Janel
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Date Posted: 21:37:29 12/02/07 Sun

Am feeling this Lily,
very powerfully expressed.

huggs,
Janel

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 00:21:15 12/03/07 Mon

Hi Stephanie, thank you for your warm greeting, kind soul, and for your eyes under the stairs..


~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 00:25:37 12/03/07 Mon

many thanks for your eyes upon Janel, i feel it too, dear of heart, undiluted and oft...



~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 20:11:07 12/08/07 Sat


Quote:
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your wind song rises to eat my sun
and i am wired to your yearnings
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~ oh I have sooo known this...on more than one level

one, being an oppressive, controlling, and consuming person,
and the other, being an overwhelming cloak of shadow
worn on the inside and wrapped 'round the heart...

though I couldn't have described it as brilliantly as you have, here, dearest Lily....
feeling this one deeply, honey bunch

((((((((((warm healing hugs)))))))))

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 23:14:53 12/09/07 Sun

'one, being an oppressive, controlling, and consuming person,
and the other, being an overwhelming cloak of shadow
worn on the inside and wrapped 'round the heart...'

you describe the needling character of pain well dear of heart.. mucha thankU's for the healing hugs (((Sasha))), i'll try to pass them on too..

~Lily

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Max Hardy
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Date Posted: 16:30:12 12/10/07 Mon

Hello Lily

A sense I feel, a sense incensed, yet, still yearning in the quick of the pain.

Took me deep did your words, so well penned.

Max

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Jessica
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Date Posted: 17:01:21 12/10/07 Mon

I've been this poem!
Jess

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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 17:00:08 12/11/07 Tue



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Read of the Day for 11th December, 2007

Chosen by Paul




CONGRATUATIONS on ROTD, dear Lily...

your poem is being showcased in

MUSE MONGERS READ OF THE DAY!!!



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*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> Subject: Re: Malady


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 23:49:16 12/11/07 Tue


hi Max, lessons to be lived and learnt yet .. thankU for allowing the deep..


some poems are like that, aren't they Jess? thank you for connecting..


Pauly & Sasha .. thank you for the pick my friends :) ..hugsss


~Lily

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