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Subject: Angels Bleed

Author:
Max Hardy

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Date Posted: 09:32:36 12/03/07 Mon

Angels Bleed

Pigments of pain
scream scarlet.

A swelling stain
in the relief
of his tapestry,
where angels bleed
in the ignomity
of his seed.

His omnipotence cede's
impotence, portents
inked in blotches
left diseased,
as angels bleed
their last refrain.

(C) Max Hardy 2007

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[> Subject: Re: Angels Bleed
Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 03:06:49 12/04/07 Tue Hi MAX This so dark it has horns and and long red tail the master in the art of his pen DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:32:08 12/10/07 Mon Hello DSL Sometimes I just wonder, and question, and ponder, and this is what comes of it. Thanks muchly my fiend for your kind words on mine. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Angels Bleed
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 06:11:04 12/04/07 Tue I am quickly becoming a fan of your pen Max. Such depth and grace in your well thought out lines. thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:34:34 12/10/07 Mon Hello Andy I am so humbled that you are enjoying my words. I am just feasting on the wealth of teachings from wonderful scribes as yourself, and loving the learning. Thanks so much for your support. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Angels Bleed
Author: Janel [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 12:26:46 12/04/07 Tue Am feeling the depths of your words Max, tis very powerful. Excellent work. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> [> Subject: Re: Angels Bleed
Author: Max Hardy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 16:37:36 12/10/07 Mon Hello Janel Sometimes, i just get to pondering, and this pondering... so much innocence suffering, how can that be if he is meant to be omnipotent...I don't know, i just wonder, and it pains my heart. Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and support. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Angels Bleed
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 20:23:21 12/08/07 Sat . ~ if only those like him would give a shit about the angels of this world then none of them would ever have to bleed this one gets me, Max...you really have such a talent and a very cool poetic voice hugs Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> [> Subject: Re: Angels Bleed

Author:
Max Hardy
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Date Posted: 16:41:31 12/10/07 Mon

Hello Sasha

Damn right, I just do not get it. How can anyone who is meant to be the fountain of love let even one innocent suffer. It bleeds me it does (not that i'm an angel mind, far from it).

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, they do humble me. Over the course of this year, your voice has been the fuel that stokes my muse. If i've not already said, just love your words.

Max

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