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] Date Posted: 18:56:08 12/23/07 Sun You could lick the night with silver tongue to send me there one stroke at a time but it wouldn't be enough to hide the shapes of grief you carved into midnight skin your truth, so freely spilled from tired and aching veins, bled warm to tainted ears, still searching for the cure for life, but begging for one last roll in the devil's bed you stole my breath as your heart pumped & purged onto my broken shoulder and I inhaled your words even as they dripped, burned, and you tattooed your sun to my aching moon then you left me... beneath the black & blue of night grateful for the winds that broke my back and in that moment I wondered, how could I stand strong enough to carry the load, without a spine? © Sasha '04 . [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:58:22 12/23/07 Sun Sash, re-reading this one and the revisions made, I was taken by the shift in your writing since this penning. When I first read it I thought it great of course, but now, with the passing of time, it is clear to see the 'new' you within the pen, a fuller, much more textured pen. Leaving this phase of you behind, has brought us a much more gifted Sasha. You will always be, Peace and hugs, Paul . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:58:58 12/23/07 Sun ~ (((((Paulie)))) well, it was a part of my life that taught me a lot about myself, and I found a strength that I didn't know I had... and as there is always room for improvement,personal growth is always a good thing, in my book :) thank you for You!!! *kiwi hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:59:56 12/23/07 Sun Yes, exactly, what Paul said, better, awesome, wonderful, all that you create. Slipping out of the dark cellar here don't want any help with gloom right now. hugs, andy . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:00:39 12/23/07 Sun ~ that you would pop in here for even a moment, right now, is a blessing to my day...thank you so much for your support and encouragement, hon... *kiwi hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Kristen (flutters) [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:01:39 12/23/07 Sun well sash, as you once said to me, i enjoy your writing, no matter the shade you pour in it... though it aches to know, sometimes it has to be in black and blue... . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:03:43 12/23/07 Sun ((((((Kristy)))))) this is an old one, revised, so you may have read it on some 'yesterday', some place else..thank you for stopping by, dear one, your visit brightens my 'today' *warm hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |