Re: Hide 'n' Seek -- Muse Mongers Room Under the Stairs

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Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek

Author:
Sasha

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Date Posted: 17:03:02 11/17/07 Sat
In reply to: Christine 's message, "Hide 'n' Seek" on 20:57:18 11/16/07 Fri

Quote:
when i bleed, it�s my flesh pierced
in knots and tears weeping,
not yours

crushed in barbs led by another�s
tongue and i hold myself tightly

~ ooooooh that is an awesome opening to this, Chris...

the strength of your poetic voice doesn't let up throughout this poem, and that, my friend, is a good thing....love this!!!

*hugs*

Sash xx

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[> Subject: Re: Hide 'n' Seek
Author: thesongman [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 18:37:11 11/30/07 Fri I can only say excellent, Not to belittle anyone's words and thoughts, but the best piece I have read tonight. Bill [ Post a Reply to This Message ]