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Author: Christine | [ Next Thread |
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] Date Posted: 22:50:35 02/04/08 Mon ![]() in fear of darkness I hold onto skin waiting for the clutch and wane to seep dreary, catching the depth of sullied and barren, my humanity unshriven I wrap myself in silent caricatures effaced and amused; masque of a thousand faces, yours, mine, ours walk the line and tow a barge, the burden is heavy where I am the weakest; my strength gone, I am dirty......and fallen we walk on, eyes straight never looking down on those we trod, never seeing the pain we cause I cry, I weep, I am human catch a falling silver if you can, it’s not enough to save you, but it will bide a time of hotness down your throat; ebullient whispers that we bank on listen carefully, the screams of lost and lonely are traversed in dilettante effigies; blinders slapped in place so that no tunnel will ever lose sight of the price, the prize so to salvage any others but ours, we cry in the night to justify our denial we feed another continent to live but where we are is just inhuman © TR [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
[> Subject: Re: Inhuman | |
Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:06:28 02/05/08 Tue Hello Christine Wow, now the message here for me is just screaming from the page, in a voice that is so delicate, yet firm in it's questioning. For me, you capture the struggle in all of us living in this man made world, chasing man made goals and dreams that are plain worthless, and cause such inhumane pain the world over...and donating ten dollars (to ease our conscience) to the homeless, or to the starving is just a million miles away from where the problem lies. This man made world is inhumane, and for me, you capture those points so eloquently. Love your voice and it's subtle strenght here. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |