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Subject: Victor Sweet

Author:
J-DuB

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Date Posted: 16:07:01 01/30/08 Wed

Victor Sweet

His name was Victor Sweet
He thought he was safe
Just because he had a gun
And a gang at his side

The fighting was ok
He knew he was the best
That night he didn’t see it coming
The bullet in his chest

He’s lying in the snow
His gang members have problems of their own
A local, called the ambulance

He’s in the hospital now
Not long till death

His gang has a new leader
He’s now kicked off his throne

What a life put to waste
For no reason at all

He’s in the morgue now
His gang members have forgotten it all

By J-DuB

Jesse Walker
(at age 11)

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[> Subject: Re: Victor Sweet
Author: Paul [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 14:09:16 01/31/08 Thu Jesse, Your Mum read this to me the other night ( between phone calls! LOL). What impresses me most is the maturity you bring to this capture of the scary side of life. Don't ever lose that need to spill Dude, it is the essence of your soul. Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Victor Sweet

Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 15:51:58 01/31/08 Thu

Hey Rock Star!

You know I like the poem a lot for a few different
reasons but, what I love best is the fact that
you get the message since you wrote the poem.

You never want to be a follower Jesse always be
your own man and you'll be just fine.

Your artistic skills are so advanced for your age.
I'm looking forward to your growth in all areas
of your life and just wanted to let you know
how proud I am of how far you have come in
such a short amount of time.

Keep on kickin' it and remember writing is good
for the soul.

Your mate,
andy

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