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Date Posted: 07:58:34 06/24/02 Mon
Author: ´HªÙ
Subject: Re: §Æ±æ¤uµ{
In reply to: shizuka 's message, "§Æ±æ¤uµ{" on 02:57:49 06/23/02 Sun

Hello shizuka:

I'm so wonder why you think [WHAT I THINK]???^_^
Besides¡e¥q¡f,I like ¡eÃþ¡fvery much! He's a guy always
clam and nice, so when my 1st story writing about to the end...
I think that ¡eÃþ¡fneed a lover, [She must be a nice and beauty girl, She must make ¡eÃþ¡fto remember her at one sight, She must make¡eÃþ¡ftake focus on her...and sure she must love ¡eÃþ¡ftoo] What's a prefect girl! It's not easy to find, but she's in my mind!

For me, writing a love scenes is not easy!
cos' many reader are teenages, if I write the scenes too detail...
I may affect those young girls, so those chapters I write so slow and make many correction before submit.

¡e¥q¡fgive¡eªª³¥¡fa room key and a phone card,
It mean that he want his girl have her choice,
though he love the girl very much, he still very nervous,
so inside the hotel room he drinks wine and pretend he have nothing. If you notice that, at the next day morning when he woke up by his sister, he move very slow and prevent to wake his girl up, I think that some guys never say or do anything sweet,
but they really care about their [One-Half], do you agree?

I'm busy to prepare my exam, but I'll write as soon as I could when I finish my exam! see you soon!

Honse


>Honse,
>
>Ãþ has always been a very nice character, but
>sometimes I feel that he's too nice and cares too much
>about others' feelings and thus neglects his own ©¯ºÖ.
>So I hope that when u write yr 3rd story, §Æ±æ¤uµ{,
>you can make him a little more "agressive" and I guess
>"selfish." ( I think I used the wrong adjectives, but
>I hope u understand what I'm trying to say.)
>
>Also, I was reading others' comments, and one
>mentioned that u have too many ¿Ë¼ö scenes in this
>story. Personally, I really like those scenes, they
>give a little more sparks to the story, and since u
>don't make it too ÅS°©, I think they are really
>great... they are so sweet and they warm one's heart.
>
>However, there is one thing I don't like about the
>scene where the guy gave the girl a room key and a
>telephone card, asking her to choose. The way the guy
>talked at that part was really weird. I know he is
>being respectful, but it sounded as if he doesn't
>really care, and he talked sort of business like. I
>would imagine that if a boy wants to have sex with his
>girlfriend, he would be a little sweeter.
> I'm so not articulate, can't really express
>what I truly feel....
>
>Anyway, keep up with yr good work.

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