.:Thoughts:. -- Moon~lit Shores

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Date Posted: 18:30:05 09/26/01 Wed
Author: FOTA
Author Host/IP: 24.18.230.26
Subject: .:Thoughts:.
In reply to: �Solitaire� 's message, "�Darkness�" on 18:07:31 09/26/01 Wed

.:Darkness. Had she been dancing upon the brim, the edge, daring for darkness to come closer? Had she fallen into it's pit and not yet found comfort, had not found tranquility?
She looks up.
Had she not found her soul destiny in the pit of blackness?
Perhaps, she was not meant to be? Was there a way to climb out of the pit? Should she climb just a bit higher and settle there, finding peace?
Questions raced through her mind.
Before she could say more, a thin, slender red line appeared over the horizon.
A wave of light ran through her veins. She closed her eyes and let it engulf her, take her.
A brillent flash of light shone abruptly.
It was like being reborn.
She was not as happy as before, and she wasn't settled... She was restless. Snorting, she whinnied, and no call answered. No one.
She was back.
Her orbs flashed across the horizon.
There had been no sunrise.
No flash of light.
She had been dreaming.
She would not be happy with good.
She just had to find her place in the dark.
Perhaps she would settle for a small candle to light the way.
Maybe.
Could she?
Yes.
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( really? you're really good. i mean, others are always like 'she feels sorriful' but you take a wave of emotion and contrast of words and string them together into a wonderful paragraph.
I'm very, very, impressed. :-) )

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�Watching, listening� -- Emerald Moon, 13:56:40 09/27/01 Thu
�Watching, listening� -- Emerald Moon, 13:56:55 09/27/01 Thu
- .:Smiles:. -- FOTA, 15:51:05 09/27/01 Thu
  - �Cold� -- Satans Close Call, 17:15:14 09/27/01 Thu
    - �Scowls� -- FOTA, 17:39:08 09/27/01 Thu
      - *Pins his lobes, muttering harsh words against that mare.* -- Emerald Moon, 12:33:16 09/28/01 Fri
        *Strike* -- SCC, 16:57:03 09/28/01 Fri
        �Silent Testimony� -- �Solitaire�, 20:38:24 09/28/01 Fri
        .:Mutter:. -- FOTA, 10:26:38 09/30/01 Sun
        �Who Am I? Let's see..� -- �Solitaire�, 18:29:00 09/30/01 Sun
        �Watches� -- Emerald Moon, 13:45:33 10/01/01 Mon
        �Growls� -- FOTA, 15:33:04 10/02/01 Tue
        �Nods� -- Emerald Moon, 06:48:42 10/08/01 Mon
�Watching, listening� -- Emerald Moon, 13:57:15 09/27/01 Thu