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Subject: Re: Abyss

Author:
FairEllen

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Date Posted: 20:34:42 08/21/01 Tue
In reply to: Just A Mona Lisa 's message, "Abyss" on 23:37:49 08/18/01 Sat

Mona Lisa, how wonderful to read you again, and your poem is most excellent. Wondered where you were - now I know! Really beautiful poem.

And Silver Angels - imagine meeting you here, too! Like a reunion.

>I watched it sink
>ever deeper
>into that black pool
>towards
>an abyss.
>
>And that door
>that opened
>so abruptly
>letting a ghost escape
>to flutter here
>next to me.
>
>And the bodies
>that floated by
>with their sightless eyes
>searing my mind
>with their knowledge.
>
>And the words
>that kept swimming
>through my head
>reminding me
>of a hundred yesterdays and tomorrows
>that never happened.
>
>And my heart
>so drawn
>to all that darkness
>feeling propelled
>through that day.
>
>And the risk
>of becoming
>someone unreal
>and intrigued
>by that thought.
>
>And the steps
>so rarely taken
>landing doorways
>all
>are locked.
>
>And the rambling,
>murmuring voices
>slipping further
>from
>this place.
>
>And in a moment
>of total clarity
>the liquid rendered
>me insane.

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Author: Just A Mona Lisa [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 13:06:38 08/22/01 Wed FairEllen ... wonderful to receive such a kind reply from you ... my thanks! I am at the maelstrom ... where I always am .. just thought I'd stop by and say "hi" to red at his new place! nice place, huh? :) [ Post a Reply to This Message ]