~-Greeting-~ -- Mare Meadows

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Date Posted: 16:39:22 11/23/01 Fri
Author: Knight Invader
Author Host/IP: c1392013-a.sttln1.wa.home.com / 65.4.172.156
Subject: ~-Greeting-~
In reply to: Destiny 's message, "~She enters the field and patiently waits, she's in no hurry.~" on 10:54:53 11/21/01 Wed

Muscular pistons move midnight hued steed t'ward femmora. Proud head held high, steed whickers a greeting doubling as an invitation to darkened femmorita...

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[> [> Re: ~She nods in a greeting back to the second stalllion.~ -- Destiny, 23:51:27 12/07/01 Fri (cache-gat-hsi.cableinet.co.uk/62.31.144.1)

~But looks toward the first. She walks slowly toward and stands beside him. Unsure if he is to accept her as his first. ~O.O.C: How do you all do such beautiful writing? (Not the fonts - the words. :) )~

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[> [> [> !Love! -- !Exile!, 12:07:58 12/08/01 Sat (inktomi2-ltn.server.ntl.com/62.252.64.5)

!love imparted at she doorstep!

Exile

"Love Is Not You Kismet, 'Tis Your Desire"

OOC- Ur, hard to explian really. I'm only ten, my teacher just sort of says I have a 'gift'. I get some of my writings from books..but mostly it's just me. :P

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[> [> [> [> !Eek! -- !Exile!, 12:09:06 12/08/01 Sat (inktomi2-ltn.server.ntl.com/62.252.64.5)

OOC-Sorry Bods! Forgot Everythin' In Last Message. I'm hungry.. :P

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[> [> [> [> [> Re: ~O.O.C.: Oops - must reply before being thrown of computer!~ -- Destiny, 10:11:41 12/13/01 Thu (usr1971-gh1.blueyonder.co.uk/62.31.173.189)

~O.O.C: Ten!?! That's amazing! Maybe I should improve my writing skills on R.P.G.s? My messages are too plain and boring....~

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[> [> [> Just read other people's posts to get the feel for it. >>> -- KI, 14:06:56 12/17/01 Mon (12-228-118-184.client.attbi.com/12.228.118.184)

You'll get better as time goes on. Reading helps your vocabulary, so read a lot. My first posts were like this:

Mare walks into the new area. She sniffs about for stallions.

Now I would write like this:

Sunlighted femmora moves on flawless appendages to unfamiliar territory. Papery nares flare as new scents are assimalated by she, there were masculine scents about...

See, you get better.

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