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Date Posted: 20:35:43 11/16/04 Tue
Author: Lialye
Subject: OOC: Oh, blah! Stupid present-tense! ...Sorry if it throws anyone off; normally when I'm writing stuff from a semi-conscious perspective it's not in present-tense...and I didn't go back and revise that post. Sorry.... And Fate...I'm going to hurry this a bit, if you don't mind, because I'm tired of scrolling down forever... BIC: It's a long swim. Lialye's feeble kicks steadily grow weaker and weaker, her water-logged mind more and more distant, fading into blackness...until finally, with a sudden burst, they break the surface. Lialye is little more than a limp rag by now, lost in unconsciousness.
In reply to: Lialye 's message, "OOC: Yay, semi-conscious post! I love writing these things! *is too stressed about school stuff to be sensible* BIC: ...Darkness...everything was dark...and wet...but so...peaceful.... She was floating...senseless...wrapped in a dark, wet world where nothing mattered...floating.... Then comes the sudden yank on her hair, hands grasping her...it's a long moment before her water-logged mind can process what's happening, that she's being rescued...distantly, she remembers her plight, and - almost as if her body wasn't hers - she began kicking her feet slowly, letting her rescuer pull her up and lending what little support she can, as a quiet corner of her mind is screaming at her to get to air /now/, before..." on 20:27:54 11/16/04 Tue

To play around with Scarlet Pimpernel lyrics just for fun, and to make them fit the scene (hurrah!), I give you:

"Swim even higher and up to the surface we go! ...To the surface! Onward ho!"

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