Episode 3 -- Greek Tragedy

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Date Posted: 18:25:26 10/01/01 Mon
Author: Alicia
Subject: Episode 3

here is my episode it kinda sux

Josh is walking and talking to himself.
Josh: I can't wait to see Megan again.

Walks a little more and sees Megan on the ground unconscious with the prince hovering over her. Prince suddenly gets up and runs away.

Josh: what has happened? What has the prince done?
(looks down) He has hurt Megan and run off. I must go after him and make him pay for what he has done. He will not get away with this. (runs off stage in anger.)

Different scene thingy

Princess is sitting by herself and the messenger comes running in.

Messenger: Princess, I have dreadful news for you.

Princess: What could be so horrible? Tell me now.

Messenger: The prince has been found dead. He has been killed by Josh in a terrible fight.

Princess: Why would Josh want to kill the prince?

Messenger: Josh stumbled upon the prince leaning over an unconscious Megan. He immediately assumed that the prince was the one who hurt her. He went after the prince in a rage and killed him. But now Megan has come to and Josh must tell her what he has done.

Princess: Oh no! The prince is dead. What have I done?

Ode

The princess must now live
with the death that she has caused
She had been too stubborn to listen
To the oracles prediction of her fate.

And now the kingdom
will also suffer a loss.
There is no heir to the throne.
Who will now take the king's place.

And now Josh must explain
Why the prince is dead.
He must hope that Megan
Will somehow be able to forgive.

The lust of one woman
has cause great pain.
Because of just one action
their lives will never be the same.

I know that the episode is kinda short but i wasnt sure what else to write. The ode also needs work.

Alicia

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