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Date Posted: 08:47:29 10/04/06 Wed
Author: Reese
Subject: Inside
In reply to: Braden 's message, "inside" on 08:39:40 10/04/06 Wed

(Her body was wracked with the shudders and shakes of a person going into shock as she knelt on the ground, trying to get below the cloud of smoke that was filling the room. She coughed, sputtered and wished that she could have a drink of water.. something wet.. anything. Her heart was so clenched inside her that she wasn't sure she was even breathing.. she might have been holding her breath.. that was how scared she was to hear him coming nearer. She could hear the determination in his voice, and prayed he was safe.. that he wasn't hurt.) Oh God.. (She murmured as fire licked at her ankle and made her jump.. she was running out of space in here. Panic and desperation had her moving towards the toilets.. there might be water there.. in case the fire crept too close.) Braden!! (She shouted, unadulterated fear in her voice. He was her only hope, she knew that now, and since she knew he wasnt stopping, she was clinging to that hope. She kept calling his name, talking to him as she crouched further and further back in the corner of the bathroom. When the sudden miniature explosion of the reinforced door being torn away sounded, she cried out and jumped back more, her heart lurching as she imagined the building collapsing on them all. But it wasn't.. and his voice had filled the room.. sounding blessidly like he was standing near her. She crawled out of the stall, started to raise to her feet and become suddenly lightheaded from smoke inhalation. She instinctively reached for him, making her way through the thick, black smoke, until she felt the solid wall of him and threw herself into his arms.) Oh.. God.. Braden.. (She choked out the words, her heart finally beating again.. because, well.. she couldn;t see what he had done to himself yet.. all she knew was there he was there.. he was in her arms, and he would get her out.)

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