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Subject: .:.Great, how's this?.:.

Author:
Zeth
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Date Posted: 16:49:37 10/09/03 Thu
In reply to: Alicia H. 's message, "$I Think That'll Work$" on 10:13:08 10/06/03 Mon

.:. It was true, that to get something worth anything, you had to give up something else. You couldn�t have both, and thus it was the only way in or out of anything. The lesson had been learn by this brute long ago, but he still tried to outwit the rule and keep everything for himself. But in this case, it was different. He didn�t want to keep both his own love and hers as well, and so, with a halted kiss- and an intent stare. He shared mentally all he had with her, allowing her full entry into his mind and soul, to take what she pleased and keep what she wanted. Grin upon his lips, it held no traces of cockiness or smug. It was a pure grin, one rarely seen- if it had indeed been spotted before. It was everything and anything all combined into one. But of all things it was, it was a promise that she held his heart. Sealing the deal with a kiss and three simple words, �I love you� what was done was done, and he was hers, as she was his. No one else in the garden would know, unless the happened to note the extreme happiness upon the male�s face. Kisses applied to her nose, he held her a little tighter. Across the world, his brother Synn had just been brought back to life, while at the same time, his sister had lots her vision in due respect of it.

(Try this for size! I just got a GREAT idea, different endings! You pick which one to go with, alright? Oh! IDEA! We could do this with battles! You write two different closing to each post, and the other person picks which one to go with, and you have to do the same�sound cool?)

1) But none of that really mattered right now, as the male�s hand drifted towards his pocket. There, hidden in that fold of fabric gleamed a ring of gold. Embedded into the rich metal was a diamond of great quality. Fingers closing around the box, he pulled it out just as he slide to the ground. Kneeling before her in the classic style, he cracked the lid of the jewel case open and whispered 4 words that would be forever etched into the minds of both. �Will you marry me?� The look in his eyes showed it was dead serious, he wasn�t playing around anymore.

(and ending two!)

2) Taking her hand in his, he brought it to his lips. �Alicia? Will you love me forever?� he asked softly, brushing his lips against hers in turn. Eyes roaming over her beautiful face, he put each feature into his memory banks.

(Just incase you didn�t want to be to serious, ya know..) (456 words) .:.

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$Falls outta Chair$ Alicia H. 17:17:01 10/09/03 Thu

.:.That good, huh? go me!.;. -- Zeth, 17:23:26 10/09/03 Thu

$You're My Hero$ -- Alicia H., 17:28:06 10/09/03 Thu

.:.Harharhar.:. -- Zeth, 17:53:05 10/09/03 Thu

$I'm Your's FOREVER$ -- Alicia H., 18:00:49 10/09/03 Thu

.:.yay!.:. -- Zeth, 18:23:08 10/09/03 Thu

$Yuppers$ -- Alicia H., 18:33:09 10/09/03 Thu

.:.Will you still love me even though I'm a Hero with no super powers?.:. -- Zeth, 19:08:35 10/09/03 Thu

$Of course....Will You love me...If I became Ugly?$ -- Alicia H., 19:16:20 10/09/03 Thu

.:.Well.......errr....umm....hmmm......ah.....hmmm......OF COURSE!.:. -- Zeth, 20:06:20 10/09/03 Thu

+] Puppet [+ -- Briallan, 22:06:20 10/09/03 Thu

.:.Who's the puppet master?.:. -- Zeth, 22:33:28 10/09/03 Thu

+] Do You Really Want To Know? [+ -- Briallan, 22:49:51 10/09/03 Thu

.:.Yes, I do. Tell me.:. -- Zeth, 23:06:28 10/09/03 Thu

:: Your worst nightmare *cackles* :: -- Briallan, 23:30:42 10/09/03 Thu

$Nightmares...My lullabye$ -- Alicia H., 23:39:27 10/09/03 Thu

.:.What was that for?!.:. -- Zeth, 23:46:22 10/09/03 Thu

:: Because I can :: -- Briallan, 23:57:07 10/09/03 Thu

$Umm Because....I dunno$ -- Alicia H., 00:05:36 10/10/03 Fri

.:.because I said so. No shoo.:. -- Zeth, 00:13:41 10/10/03 Fri

:: sleep all the little children :: -- Briallan, 00:24:38 10/10/03 Fri

$But I don't wanna go to bed mommy$ -- Alicia H., 00:29:32 10/10/03 Fri

.:.Me either!.:. -- Zethy, 00:38:33 10/10/03 Fri

:: Tough Cookies :: -- Briallan, 00:57:23 10/10/03 Fri

$But MOM!$ -- Alicia H., 01:03:09 10/10/03 Fri

.:.No one else I know has a bedtime!.:. -- Zeth, 01:08:51 10/10/03 Fri

:: Loo does :: -- Briallan, 01:18:34 10/10/03 Fri

$et M� Fr�� -- Alicia H., 01:22:28 10/10/03 Fri
.:.That was a low blow.:. -- Zeth, 01:22:32 10/10/03 Fri

:: *knees Zeth's groin* THAT was a low blow! :: -- Briallan, 01:29:19 10/10/03 Fri

.:.How HATEFUL!.:. -- Zeth, 01:35:14 10/10/03 Fri

:: Nah... just my way of preventing any more fruit from falling from Zeth's loins :: -- Briallan, 01:42:43 10/10/03 Fri

.:.To late ^_^.:. -- Zeth, 01:51:30 10/10/03 Fri

:: yeshy... but we're trying to avoid any more fruit from falling :: -- Briallan, 01:58:42 10/10/03 Fri

.:.Sorry, that ainta gonna happen! he froze SPERM!.:. -- Zeth, 02:03:57 10/10/03 Fri

-*Arrival*- -- Kosses, 02:13:20 10/10/03 Fri

:: Eeeeeeeee... Lucky Alicia... POPCICLE :: -- Briallan, 02:19:43 10/10/03 Fri

>.< -- Zeth, 02:26:46 10/10/03 Fri

-*Wretch*- -- Zeth, 02:34:38 10/10/03 Fri

:: Pooooooooooopcicle :: -- Briallan, 02:45:03 10/10/03 Fri

.:.Shhhh.:. -- Zeth, 02:49:33 10/10/03 Fri

:: Snot Factory is over productive :: -- Briallan, 02:59:52 10/10/03 Fri

.:.But the Tissue companies make a killing.:. -- Kosses, 23:03:19 10/12/03 Sun

:: Just On Me Alone :: -- Briallan, 23:26:17 10/12/03 Sun

$Oi...Me Too. *Blows Nose Again*$ -- Alicia H., 23:35:46 10/12/03 Sun

-*And me in the mornings*- -- Zeth, 23:45:35 10/12/03 Sun

:: Get Lit Get Laid :: -- Briallan, 00:05:35 10/13/03 Mon

$Drunken Joy$ -- Alicia H., 00:15:30 10/13/03 Mon

" IM BOT SDSRUINK, " Directly from the mouth of Roo. Translated: 'I'm not drunk'. Suuuuuure -- Zeth, 01:17:08 10/13/03 Mon

That was Kossy's posty! (NT) -- Obviously I'm as drunk as Roo, 01:41:04 10/13/03 Mon

(Ooc:) my neck tfe;;s like fgoo < another Roo Statement -- Alicia H., 11:28:54 10/13/03 Mon

(and what, pray tell, does that statment mean?) -- The Hug and Tackel Looren Doll, 20:58:32 10/13/03 Mon

.:.*waiting for definition of above stated*.:. -- Zeth, 23:05:58 10/14/03 Tue

:: *shrugs* :: -- Briallan, 00:20:17 10/15/03 Wed

$Who Cares...Not Me$ -- Alicia H., 00:25:04 10/15/03 Wed

William asked me out ^_^ -- Zeth and Kosses, 00:46:35 10/15/03 Wed

:: ITCHY GOOMBA :: -- Briallan, 00:59:11 10/15/03 Wed

$3am...I'm good as Dead$ -- Alicia H., 01:05:22 10/15/03 Wed

.:.Same Here.:. -- Zeth, 01:08:05 10/15/03 Wed

:: Deflower the wench! :: -- Briallan, 01:17:33 10/15/03 Wed

Wench! -- Zeth, 01:28:58 10/15/03 Wed

:: Deflower the... :: -- Briallan, 01:39:09 10/15/03 Wed

$Insane Clown$ -- Alicia H., 01:49:31 10/15/03 Wed

.:.Monkeys.:. -- Zeth, 01:56:41 10/15/03 Wed

:: Weirdos :: -- Briallan, 02:05:12 10/15/03 Wed

$Sickos$ -- Alicia H., 02:08:27 10/15/03 Wed

..Am Not.:. -- Kosses, 02:19:59 10/19/03 Sun

:: I know I am, but what are you? :: -- Briallan, 02:33:01 10/19/03 Sun

.:.Smart?.:. or is it...smaarte? -- Kosses, 02:56:19 10/19/03 Sun

:: I know I am, but what are you? :: -- Briallan, 03:06:01 10/19/03 Sun

.:.Copy Cat.:. -- Kosses, 19:08:10 10/20/03 Mon

:: I know you are but what am I? :: -- Briallan, 19:51:41 10/20/03 Mon

.:.I Know You Are But What Am I?.:. -- Zeth, 20:04:14 10/20/03 Mon

:: Lemons & Salt :: -- Briallan, 21:12:28 10/20/03 Mon

.:.A Broken Crown?.:. -- Kosses, 21:27:37 10/20/03 Mon

:: Time to see the dentist :: -- Briallan, 21:43:21 10/20/03 Mon

* Appearances Aren't Everything * -- The Forgotten, 23:18:17 10/23/03 Thu

:: That's Politics :: -- Briallan, 00:58:07 10/27/03 Mon