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Date Posted: 05:45:08 01/04/02 Fri
Author: FireFairy
Subject: Re: "Tongues"-Chapter One
In reply to: Quartz 's message, "Re: "Tongues"-Chapter One" on 11:34:23 01/03/02 Thu

I've noticed that part too, and I wasn't sure what to do with it. I think that the '"Serphia," Serphia says' works better, even if it's still akward.

As for the changes, I've had one of my teachers go over it, and my friends (who are also writers...it's amazing how we band together). They're suggestions help.

Thanks, and you're welcome!

~FireFairy

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