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aj-ent v
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Date Posted: 21:31:54 02/25/02 Mon
In reply to:
Stephen Teppenheart
's message, "Seriously" on 08:33:04 02/23/02 Sat
>Seriously, this webpage is horrible. You owe me 4
>minutes of my life back for looking at the piece of
>poop site. This site makes me want to throw up on my
>new shoes. The first thing you can do to make this
>site better is fix all your spelling errors. I mean
>come on, what are you, 2 years old? Learn how to
>write. Hey, but seriously, the cd rocks but this site
>is unbelievable(not in a good way).
before you knock someone else's writing abilities, take a look at your own.
1. In sentence two "the" is suppose to be "this" - "You owe me 4 minutes of my life back for looking at this piece of poop site.
2. In sentence four a "," is suppose to follow "is" - The first thing you can do to make this site better is, fix all your spelling errors.
3. Sentence five is lacking a "," after "mean" these are all seperate thoughts (sentence fragments). - I mean, come on, what are you, 2 years old?
4. Sentence seven, your last one, Needs "CD" to be capitalized since it is an abriviation of Compact Disc, a "," is to precede "but" (that is a compound sentence), using the same word in the same sentence ("but") when it is not a noun or pronoun is a giant no-no, and , finally, a space is needed between "unbelievable" and "(." - Hey, seriously, the CD rocks, but this site is unbelievable (not in a good way).
you have written seven sentences and have seven grammatical errors.
so to quote someone not so famous:
"Learn how to write." -- you
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