| Subject: Re: don't forget to think before you act |
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katie
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Date Posted: 12:18:17 02/26/02 Tue
In reply to:
aj-ent v
's message, "don't forget to think before you act" on 21:31:54 02/25/02 Mon
>>Seriously, this webpage is horrible. You owe me 4
>>minutes of my life back for looking at the piece of
>>poop site. This site makes me want to throw up on my
>>new shoes. The first thing you can do to make this
>>site better is fix all your spelling errors. I mean
>>come on, what are you, 2 years old? Learn how to
>>write. Hey, but seriously, the cd rocks but this site
>>is unbelievable(not in a good way).
>
>
>before you knock someone else's writing abilities,
>take a look at your own.
>
>1. In sentence two "the" is suppose to be "this" -
>"You owe me 4 minutes of my life back for looking at
>this piece of poop site.
>
>2. In sentence four a "," is suppose to follow "is" -
>The first thing you can do to make this site better
>is, fix all your spelling errors.
>
>3. Sentence five is lacking a "," after "mean" these
>are all seperate thoughts (sentence fragments). - I
>mean, come on, what are you, 2 years old?
>
>4. Sentence seven, your last one, Needs "CD" to be
>capitalized since it is an abriviation of Compact
>Disc, a "," is to precede "but" (that is a compound
>sentence), using the same word in the same sentence
>("but") when it is not a noun or pronoun is a giant
>no-no, and , finally, a space is needed between
>"unbelievable" and "(." - Hey, seriously, the CD
>rocks, but this site is unbelievable (not in a good
>way).
>
>you have written seven sentences and have seven
>grammatical errors.
>
>so to quote someone not so famous:
> "Learn how to write." -- you
Okay, I really don't like to bash other people, especially when I don't know them, but seriously. Get a life! Guess someone forgot to mind their p's and q's.
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