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Date Posted: 08:49:40 11/17/00 Fri
Author: 鄧琬容,第三組
Subject: 回應《雪落在中國土地上》及《詩八首》

我覺得詩是詩人對客觀的環境所引起的感覺,然後用筆墨描寫出來的。所以我對於呂螢所說艾青的悲傷憂鬱的氣氛的「根源是在詩人的主觀心情」有所保留。正如導修組同學也提到詩是物、景、情是互扣而成的。
至於艾青《雪落在中國的土地上》中的悲傷憂鬱,我認為是帶有積極意思的。因我覺得詩是詩人對未來所寄與的信息,是用來訴說理想和信念。所以艾青這首詩中,應該是帶有積極的意味的。作者在詩中是透過不斷描寫「寒冷在封鎖著中國」、中國的人民正處於生活的絕望及饑饉的大地中,渲染出一股悲哀的氣氛,代表詩人對時代命運的關切及對人民的身同感受,也在此鼓舞、催促及鞭策人民勇敢面對這樣的困難,希望中國能盡快走出困境的。尾段的一句:我的在沒有燈光的晚上/所寫的無力的詩句能給你些許溫暖麼?」中的「溫暖」也就明顯地寫出了作者的希望。
至於《詩八首》,我同意孫玉石的說話,這詩的確沒有一般愛情詩的纏綿熱烈,這是因為這詩的中心思想是去探討愛情,是作者嘗試透過平白的句子或景象去帶出討論愛情是什麼,而不是寫愛情中兩個人怎麼相處甜蜜的情況,故少了卿卿我我的景象。
另外,詩中所提到「上帝」、「主」的的字眼,我覺得是沒有宗教意味。撇開宗教本身的角度來看,其實「上帝」、「主」等字眼,只是一個名詞,代表一樣東西,不應該因為一個名詞的出現,就當作是有特別的意味,反而是應該通過文章的上文下理去欣賞文章。在這處,我就覺得如老師所說,只是代表造物主或者是一種令「你」、「我」的感覺被安排的原因。

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