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Date Posted: 10:23:00 07/27/02 Sat
Author: Terina
Subject: Re: Scratch the Surface
In reply to: 's message, "Re: Scratch the Surface" on 10:20:29 07/27/02 Sat

Chapter 6
Stevie opened the door to find her standing there with tears streaming down her face and a duffel bag in her hand.
Stevie: "Well well, what have we here? Come back for more eh?" he smiled evilly and she wondered how she could ever have thought his smile attractive.
Terina: "I came to tell you to go to hell" And then she spit in his face. He stared at her through a mist of rage and then grabbed her wrist and yanked her into the house. Slamming the door behind him he threw a hard punch to her jaw and knocked her out.
Through his wild laughing, if anyone had been around, they would have been able to hear him say.
Stevie: "That was fun b###h, get up, let's do it again"
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Terina's dad opened the front door.
TD: "Talib! What are you doing here??"
Talib: "Um, did Terina come home Mr. A.?"
TD: "You're damn right she did! I sent her packing, yesiree I did!"
Talib: "Excuse me sir?"
TD: "I sent her off to live with that boyfriend of hers, everyone in town now she's sleeping with him. My daughter the whore. Second thought, she's no daughter of mine! I can't believe she disgraced me like this!" Talib stared at him in shock.
Talib: "You sent her to Stevie's?"
TD(proudly): "Didn't just send her! I took her there myself and made sure he took the little tramp in!"
Talib: "Where does he live Mr. A?"
TD: "Who? Stevie?"
Talib: "Yes"
TD: "Well..I don't think you should go messing with him Talib, you've always been around to clean up Terina's mess, not this time, nosiree!" Talib's anger got the best of him.
Talib: "LISTEN TO YOURSELF! Terina is your daughter and for all I know you could have just send her off to her death and you sound PROUD about it! What is your problem?! How could you not notice that something was wrong!" Talib knew he really didn't have any proof in what he was saying but he didn't care.
Talib: "And as for me cleaning up Terina's messes, I don't know where that came from! Terina always cleaned up my messes! She is the most amazing person I know and I love her and you better give me that address right now! If anything happens to her before I get to her I'm blaming you and I will personally get you for it!"
Terina's dad stepped away from him in shock.
TD: "Now son, I don't know what's gotten into you, but if you'd just calm down.."
Talib: "GET ME THAT ADDRESS!!"
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As Talib pulled up in front of the address he'd been given he didn't give himself a chance to think about anything other than Terina's well being. If he had, he might have realized that her dad had called the police on him, or that he'd just come right out and admitted to being in love with her. But none of that was important to him right now. He hopped out of the car and ran up to the front door.
It was answered by a guy who was definitely a football player, he was 6'3" and at least 250 lbs. That didn't bother Talib though, he didn't even blink an eye.
Talib: "You Stevie?"
Stevie: "Yeah..you that imajin boy ain't ya?"
Talib: "Where's Terina?"
Stevie: "who?"
Talib: "Terina"
Stevie: "Don't know no Terina" Talib grabbed him by his collar and slammed him against the doorjamb.
Talib: "You better tell me where she is, and you better do it right now.." he between clenched teeth.
Stevie smiled.
Stevie: "#### you" He pushed Talib away as if he were a feather, but Talib was not one to give up easily. He pushed Stevie through the door, and then punched him in the jaw, knocking him backwards.
Talib(yelled): "Terina?? Terina?! Are you here?", as Stevie rubbed his jaw and got himself back together.
Stevie: "That was a bad idea" he complained and then punched Talib straight in the nose, knocking him on to the floor. When Talib efforted to get up Stevie kicked him in the stomach, knocking him back to the floor. Talib felt like he was going to puke and curled up into the fetal position.
Talib laughed and then began to leave, but the anger had not yet left his system. He came back and started to kick Talib in the head continuously while letting a flow of curses tumble out of his mouth. The last thing Talib heard before he blacked out was..
Stevie: "You mother ####er, get your own ####ing hoe!! You think with all your ####ing money you can just rush in and take mine? Guess again bastard!"

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Re: Scratch the Surface -- Terina, 10:29:02 07/27/02 Sat
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