| Subject: Re: Good Bye, My Love |
Author:
klang wizard
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Date Posted: 08:59:08 07/22/13 Mon
Author Host/IP: 191.216.48.60.klj04-home.tm.net.my/60.48.216.191
In reply to:
little grasshopper
's message, "Re: Good Bye, My Love" on 17:53:38 07/20/13 Sat
>Wizard,
>
>Good writing. But is this fiction or real? Should we
>be reading more into what is written?
>
>
>Regards, LG
>
>> Good bye, my love
>> Too old, I shove
>> You, out of my way
>> You betray
>> Separation, right monetary action
>> Retain you, forever, in my memory
>> Seek a fabulous model to be happy
>> Three decades, finally fallen engine
Thanks Grasshopper, I have edited my poem, what I have written is always true to my emotion and thoughts.
Good bye, my love
Too old, I shove
You, out of my way
You betray
Separation,
Right monetary action
You, forever, in my memory
A fabulous model to stay happy
End to three decades of romantic relation,
Final fallen engine at a traffic junction.
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In this world, we are sometimes uncertain on the truth or falsity of some statements. It also depends on how we read them, esp. the final twist to make poetry interesting to read.
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