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Date Posted: 16:05:39 04/13/01 Fri
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: Paint a Picture
In reply to: ElizabethGray 's message, "Paint a Picture" on 16:37:57 04/12/01 Thu

Paint the table with only three legs
and the chair as well;
do the dead weigh anything,
anyways? They won't tip.
Paint a picture of the way
I feel right now,
and set it in the sun to age.
Then picture me ten years from now;
Faded gray.


Overall I like this piece, however I must be honest and say
that I get a little lost reading through the above.

It's from "do the dead weigh" that I have difficulty understanding where your headed with this.

Perhaps it's the way I am reading, if you could clarify this I would be grateful.

thanks

Rafael

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