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Date Posted: 18:17:30 11/17/00 Fri
Author: Rafaél
Subject: Re: worn : near finished but need critique
In reply to: Dimon 's message, "worn : near finished but need critique" on 03:46:54 11/17/00 Fri

Hi Amigo

I would love to spend some time with this and give my opinion.
I have read the piece through a number of times and so far
the only real crit is that it is over so soon.

I want to really look at this but life and such are monopolising
my time for a few days, I will post a general note here later
I am having to be off line for almost a week, so have much
to do before travelling tomorrow.
When I get back I have a few ideas to try and am of couse
open to suggestions from other people here.

Take care and have a great weekend,
I will take another look at this poem
on my return and comment then.

Rafael

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