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Subject: Redwall No More?


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Brookie, Pebble, & Amber
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Date Posted: 16:58:20 10/01/07 Mon

Redwall No More?


Prolouge

Ah, you're here. Close the door and warm yourself by the fire. Listen to the tale of a horde of blood-thirsty vermin, bent on taking over the Abbey of Redwall. A tale of Dibbuns, trying to prove to the Elders that they are old enough to go into Mossflower Woods alone. A tale of misery and woe, kindness and caring, death and life. Listen my child, to a tale of Redwall.

Chapter One

A group of rag-tag vermin huddled around the fire. Trying to shield themselves against the harsh, biting winter gusts.
There were many fires in that camp that night, but this one was the most important. A short, gray water rat stood, and spoke:
"Ah'm tired orf o' dis nonsense. We'll neva make it ta dis Re' wall place! Wha does Flameclaw 'ave ta go thar? I's crazy! E'ry beas' dat gose thar doi's. 'Asn't she 'eard o' Cluny da Scourge? Skished boi a bell so 'e was. An' doze Marlfoskers, kill'd orf alla 'em! Dis is crazy, I tell's ya! Crazy! We're all gonna..." He trailed off, for right beside him, was Onyx Flameclaw herself. Her axe struck flesh. Blood spurted everywhere. She side-stepped neatly out of it. "This 'un was lucky," she growled, "The next who I hear cumplainin' I gonna make it a lot slowah! Do annah of ya bumblin' block'eads wanna join this lifeless lump, eh?!" She paused dramatically, her eyes scowling. She looked around as is searching for something. Her eyes settled on a large ferret. She motioned for him to come up, "All beasts gather 'round!" she roared, catching the vermin off guard.Scores of hordebeasts came closer to the fire. "Slan," she commanded," Recite that Rhyme of Redwall you told me not three days past." Slan looked nervous, but recited the Rhyme in a sing-song voice:

"Riches, silver an' gold,
mountains of treasure untold.
All sorts o' things ta behold,
at the H'abbey o' Redwall!

There be nice food,
an' diamonds many hued.
Lotsa pretty pearls ta be viewed.
At the h'Abbey of Redwall!

There be a sword o' magic,
hid 'hind then walls of brick!
but beware! The inhab'tants are full o' dirty tricks,
That's the H'abbey o' Redwall!"

The vixen smiled slyly and voiced her thanks: "You have a nice voice, Slan. Don't you see, friends? The Abbey has wondrous riches of all kinds! You lot can have it all, providin' you all still wanna come. Get a good night's rest, we march at dawn." She marched off, followed by her two captains, a stoat, Oakrose, a red badger, Bull, and her advisor, Dharku. She paused and looked over her shoulder, "Dharku! Send me two good scouts, on the triple!" She retreated to her tent.

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Forget to post my dorm*shakes head sadly* I'm in TT (NT)Brookie, Pebble, & Amber16:59:24 10/01/07 Mon
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please put us in it! We can be captured if you want. Please remember we are twins! Also, maybe you should use Tagdust or Tagmist instead of blood.(some dibbuns don't like blood) (NT)lissi & robi (COOL STORY!!)19:58:41 10/01/07 Mon
I'm going to and your in the next chapter..... (NT)Brookie, Pebble, & Amber12:08:00 10/02/07 Tue
Yo! I like it! Keep up the good work! (NT)Lettuceleaf Horatio22:10:53 10/03/07 Wed
I've heard about you, Snowflake. I'll ask Tangle...I don't think you joied...... (NT)Brookie, Pebble, & Amber14:16:54 10/04/07 Thu
Chapter Two (inside) !!!!Brookie, Pebble, & Amber14:51:01 10/04/07 Thu
heheheehe. That was the best. It made me laugh. Good job. (NT)Swordling and Battle18:01:23 10/04/07 Thu
Hey Brookie i think you should join this site. Link insideSwordling and Battle20:21:19 10/04/07 Thu
Heh, not bad. Tinsy's not a back-down, at least not unless she might get back for the offence later...but anyway, nice job. (NT)Tinsy21:30:48 10/04/07 Thu
joined as brookie! (NT)Brookie, Pebble, and Amber21:44:28 10/04/07 Thu
Heh. I liked it. Good job. (NT)Lettuce01:41:44 10/05/07 Fri
Swordling...are you a member of the site?? (NT)Brookie, Pebble, and Amber15:38:50 10/05/07 Fri
yep i'm Leera. I'm the one that pmed you! Thanks for joinning (NT)Swordling and Battle15:46:14 10/05/07 Fri
much welcome, it's SO COOL! (NT)Brookie, Pebble, and Amber20:37:05 10/05/07 Fri
Dorm? (NT)Hermes and Laceleaf22:53:29 10/05/07 Fri
Sorry, TT. Yes I asked Tangle. She said I can put you in it and I will. If you go to the Tapestry and click on Tapestry then you'll see what info I need. You know you CAN join though, don't you? (NT)Brookie, Pebble, & Amber14:06:09 10/07/07 Sun
I heard about that happening. Just email Tangle about that. I think somethings wrong with your cookies. Chapter Three is Inside!!Brookie, Pebble, and Amber14:37:09 10/08/07 Mon
I'm in TT. I think you just email Tangle your details and she tells you what dorm your in. I'm not sure......I'll give you the info I need inside the message!Brookie, Pebble, and Amber14:39:58 10/08/07 Mon
Chapter Four!Brookie, Pebble, and Amber21:02:33 10/08/07 Mon
Chapter Five!!Brookie, Pebble, and Amber21:44:42 10/08/07 Mon
  • Info -- Snowflake(who has a twin sister, Firetail), 23:41:44 10/08/07 Mon
hahahahah i love the whole shoe thing very funny! (NT)Swordling and Battle00:33:52 10/09/07 Tue
Yes i have an alt. Um Snowflake my dad won't let me just browser on youtube he doesn't want me to see anything bad. If you gave me the links to some good Redwall vidos he wouldn't mind could you please do it? (NT)Swordling and Battle17:55:42 10/09/07 Tue
Snowflake, Swordling, could you please refrain from posting non-related stuff on this board? This is for posting and critiquing stories, not for finding videos. (NT)Hermes and Laceleaf02:00:56 10/10/07 Wed
oops my bad Sorry! (NT)Swordling and Battle19:02:35 10/10/07 Wed
You're forgiven. (NT)Hermes and Laceleaf00:19:24 10/11/07 Thu
Chapter Six! I think you'll be in soon, SnowieBrookie16:16:17 10/11/07 Thu
I probably laughed so many times! 'The cute hedgehog Tangle' really got me. And I loved how hyper Eragona seemed. That was funny. (NT)Eragona Treerose (Rolling on Floor)20:53:24 10/16/07 Tue
Thanks, I'm glad everyone likes it. Wait'll you hear the next chapter.....COMING SOON! (NT)Brookie19:53:17 10/17/07 Wed
I'm working on it but I've been busy....plus Our computer was very ornery. I think it's fiked now. We downlaoded Firefox. *awesome!* (NT)Brookie19:31:44 10/18/07 Thu


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