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Subject: Redwall No More? Author: Brookie [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 01:10:58 10/19/07 Fri Chapter Seven Back with Onyx Flameclaw's horde, Onyx was getting angry. She had told her fighters to hunt around for food. What did they bring back? Some berries and roots. Barely enough for two beasts. She stood in front of the scringing group. "What where my orders for you fools!?" She kicked one of the group, a stoat. "You! Answer." The stoat bowed low, " M-majestry, youse ordered us'n's to 'unt furr sum vittles." She kicked him to the ground, savagely. ''And what did you bring me back?! Some shriveled berries and tasteless roots!" Her face was purple with rage. "That is not vikkles! That is not fit for the Horde of Onyx Flameclaw! You are a lousy, louse bitten, lazy, lucrative, lot!" She smiled a small slit of a smile, "I will let you live, however. Bring me some scoff that you can actually eat!'' She turned to back into her tent. "Do not fail me! There will be harsh consequences if you don't obey!" She returned to her tent where Dharku was waiting. "Why am I served by brainless idiots?" she asked, talking more to herself than Dharku. "I ask them to bring back some vittles and all they bring is food fit for woodlanders!" Dharku comforted her smoothly, his voice like oil sliding on a frying pan."Onyx, majesty, that is why you are in charge. Without you they would be like chaff on the wind." Flameclaw considered this for a moment. "Yesssss, you are right." And she settled down to sleep. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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Subject Author Date Chapter Eight! I hope y'all like it! Brookie 15:07:55 10/19/07 Fri Chapter Nine! (Can you tell I've been writing like a Madbeast?!) Brookie 20:48:28 10/19/07 Fri Chapter Ten! (VEEEERRRRRYY short :O) Brookie, Pebble, and Amber 21:21:35 10/19/07 Fri Good job. These are good. (NT) Swordling and Battle 00:24:09 10/20/07 Sat More? (NT) -- snowie (snowflake), 02:48:50 10/20/07 Sat Huh, I wish. I'm going to be busy for a couple of days. Church, and today I have some other stuff to do. (NT) Brookie 12:53:29 10/20/07 Sat Yeah.. same here. (NT) -- Snowflake "Snowie", 15:06:00 10/20/07 Sat YAY*throws up her hands in joy!* (NT) Brookie 15:40:07 10/20/07 Sat ? what do you mean? (NT) -- snowflake "Snowie", 16:06:41 10/20/07 Sat nuttin' :) Chapter 11 Brookie, Pebble, and Amber 15:33:18 10/23/07 Tue :) (why is everyone not postin'? Not alot of activity latley...) (NT) -- Snowflake, 00:29:21 10/25/07 Thu yes, there isn't much :(. Chapter 12. It's GOOD! Brookie, Pebble, and Amber 16:07:43 10/25/07 Thu