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Subject: Chapter Nine! (Can you tell I've been writing like a Madbeast?!)

Author:
Brookie

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Date Posted: 20:48:28 10/19/07 Fri
In reply to: Brookie 's message, "Redwall No More?" on 01:10:58 10/19/07 Fri

Chapter Nine
The next morning, before the sun was even up, the wind was blowing hard enough to knock a small Dibbun over. "Blast the wind!" Flameclaw screamed, "Blast the stinking wind!" Suddenly a gust blew so hard that it knocked her over! Mumbling curses she stumbled into one of her soldiers tents. She grabbed a bucket of water, the top frozen by the extreme winter cold. Throwing the contents on the pile of vermin, heaped high trying to get warm, she screamed, "Wake up! Imbeciles! Fools!" She rushed at them, dealing kicks and slaps all around. "Why are you still snoring like a bunch of wild pigs! Why?! We have to be at Redwall by tonight! Get your things packed! We leave as soon as the sun rises!" The vermin rushed off to do as she had ordered. Onyz headed toward the woods, hoping to find a small snack before heading off.
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Dharku stood in the woods with a few trusted foxes. In his opinion all he could trust was his own kind. Except for Onyx Flameclaw. "Lisken," he said, whispering."I'm tired of Flameclaw pushin' uz around. Are youse?" His fellow foxes nodded their heads. "Who's to say less cut orf 'er head,"
"Who's to say let's cut off yours!" Onyx darted out of a bush and swiftly chopped off Dharku's head with her lethal sword.
"You four, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!" The group ran, not daring even to look back.

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Chapter Ten! (VEEEERRRRRYY short :O)	Brookie, Pebble, and Amber	21:21:35 10/19/07 Fri