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Subject: Re: 1x06: Awakening


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VKMax
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Date Posted: 01:48:15 04/14/04 Wed
In reply to: VKMax 's message, "Re: 1x06: Awakening" on 01:47:10 04/14/04 Wed

INT. DARRENS HOUSE – DAY

Darren is on the phone as Jack sits in the background.

DARREN

I’m telling you Dawn it has these weird pictures all over the place… I DUNNO!

(sigh)

Call me when you have anything okay?

Darren hangs up and sighs as Jack stares at him

DARREN

Do I have stuff on my face? You look like you’re going to take a bite out of me

JACK

No – and No.

DARREN

Good and…good.

JACK

I like Jamie.

DARREN

I like Jamie too – most of the time.

JACK

No, I mean, I like Jamie

DARREN

Oh…OH! Well, that’s cool

JACK

Which means you need to back off

DARREN

Err…what?

JACK

If you’re my friend, you’ll back off

DARREN

I’m not, not being friends with her for you

JACK

I don’t want you to stop being friends – I just want you to stop trying to get with her

DARREN

Okay I missed a whole lot of something

JACK

I have to go now – I have things to do.

Jack grabs his bag and walks out of the door, leaving it open.

MUSIC: ‘Smoke’ by Natalie Imbruglia.

Darren is pacing in front of the phone as his mobile begins to ring.

My lullaby’ hung out to dry
what’s up with that
it’s over


He presses the cancel button as Jamie’s name flashes on the screen

MIX TO.

Jamie is huddled up staring out of her window as she places her phone down

where are you dad
mums’ looking sad
what’s up with that
it’s dark in here


MIX TO.

Jack stares at his Dad as he walks out of the door

MIX TO.

Jack ties bandages around his wrists and punches his hands together as he steps into a ring – dozens of people surround him as another man, twice his size, steps out.

why bleeding is breathing
you’re hiding’ underneath the smoke in the room
try’ bleeding is believing
I used to


Jack puts his fists up – ready to fight.

MIX TO.

Thalia and Ryan are kissing on Ryan’s bed – the photo of the two of them at the party, has been torn up.

MIX TO.

Darren stares at the phone

MUSIC FADES as the phone rings.

DARREN

Dawn?

(beat)

What? Queen of the what?

CUT TO.

INT. TEMPLE – DAY

Two vampires rush out from behind a red velvet curtain – they’re closely followed by a woman in a gold gown, her long read hair trailing behind her as she perches on the thrown

VAMPIRES (4 of them)

All hail Queen Marina

MARINA

Yes, all hail me

She grins as two vampires drag a young man from behind the curtain – he’s struggling as Marina grabs him by the neck and vamps out – sinking her teeth into him.

END.

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Wow, you've really outdone yourself with this oneEvilWillowFan15:20:11 04/14/04 Wed


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