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Date Posted: 17:38:56 04/30/01 Mon
Author: james
Subject: the best youve done on this board yet. I also like how youve made him repulsive at points but he also seems to have pride and standing. I like the image created by the last 2 paragraphs more than the first it makes him seem more of an action dog. Maybe its also because i wanted to forget about how terrible you made him seem at first. and i cant imagine a dog being fully white. Dogs are amazing.
In reply to: meg 's message, "The Dog" on 12:32:13 04/06/01 Fri


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[> Some beautiful imagery. Interesting how you create the dog as some kind of tragic k9 hero. I think the gothic imagery might have worked better on a great dane. =) I don't like the way it ends on the His name was prince thing. I think it gives a somewhat Tennysonian false uplifting note to the end of the poem. -- George, 18:59:42 04/30/01 Mon

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