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Date Posted: 23:58:21 05/03/01 Thu
Author: George
Subject: Poem numero duex//

Honey

Bambaleo and the night seems young
I can only imagine what is inside
Just for a moment I hear a voice
Whispering to me, as if it was my own.
Or something of my creation,
Amongst disco lights and sweaty bodies.
Sometimes I pretend that we are the same
Even though I can only be comforted by your body.
Sometimes I pretend that it is your eyes telling the truth
Not your lips, full of ignorance and compromise.
Sometimes I pretend that we are the same
Even though the wind blows fast through my hands
Sometimes I pretend that I don't care about dying
Not a death of honour, nothing but a casuality
Of a life in the gutter of the fast lane.
Every time I move a little closer
You move a little further away and meow,
Don't you see that all I want is a moments companionship?
Your animal mind doesn't understand that though
And we are left emptied and deceived.
You were never mine, and I burnt these bridges long before
You walked across them//

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[> now THIS i really like. i much prefer this to your first one. the only bit i don't like too much is 'meow' - hmmm too much i think. i love thr bridges thing. i'm not even sure i like bamboleo at the beginning. i love the rest of it. it holds a more genuine quality than that of the first one. the first one seemed too trying this one is much more 'real' i guess. ilike the pace and all that stuff too - works well here. -- zeina, 16:07:30 05/08/01 Tue

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