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Date Posted: 22:28:00 05/24/01 Thu
Author: james
Subject: ok i actually dont mind this so much unless i try to force your ideas upon it. The nasty strawberry thing is pretty good with the swallowing something stereotpically sweet. The 'dear' is incredibly patronising (i feel) and really helps. I like how it is degrading to the other person, that he has to leave his pride at the door.
In reply to: Zeina Muna 's message, "playing with haikus a bit....." on 19:12:48 05/07/01 Mon


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[> ok now then, skewed lips just seems ugly and awkward. Arms like blown curtains is too hard to picture nad really distant from everything else. It helps set the scene but little else. I like the idea of the person being in control when he is directing her. Just the politely ruins it there and seems really weak compared tot he overall patronising, controlling tone. Dont understand why its in haikus either. -- james, 22:29:17 05/24/01 Thu

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