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Date Posted: 08:50:06 05/25/01 Fri
Author: luke
Subject: Why the form? Not just bitter, but insane and horrid. Quite good but I hate seeing this every time I come on the board. The images work well; strawberry, curtains, crown.
In reply to: Zeina Muna 's message, "playing with haikus a bit....." on 19:12:48 05/07/01 Mon


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[> Re: playing with haikus a bit..... -- tim, 13:31:02 05/25/01 Fri

I like the extension of haiku format into a longer type of poem, its quite a good idea; especially if its original?! The poem suggests something of another poet... another poet that has lied to you?? At times it seems that you are in control of him, and at times it is quite the opposite; which creates a certain ambiguity. But I am not sure if I like the uncertainty it creates... what do you want from this poem?? Overall really good, but I like your morning radio ghost one better!!

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