I like the idea behind the poem, and the developement throughout. Some of the description in here is really good. It manages to both please and shock the reader at the same time, which is impressive. However, the use of 'like' can be a bit tedious, or is there an ulterior motive in its use? Overall, very challenging and very well written. -- Some Let Me Make You

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Date Posted: 13:37:19 05/25/01 Fri
Author: tim
Subject: I like the idea behind the poem, and the developement throughout. Some of the description in here is really good. It manages to both please and shock the reader at the same time, which is impressive. However, the use of 'like' can be a bit tedious, or is there an ulterior motive in its use? Overall, very challenging and very well written.
In reply to: luke 's message, "Kind of inspired by 'By Grand Central Station I sat down and wept'" on 06:43:14 05/08/01 Tue

I like the idea behind the poem, and the developement throughout. Some of the description in here is really good. It manages to both please and shock the reader at the same time, which is impressive. However, the use of 'like' can be a bit tedious, or is there an ulterior motive in its use? Overall, very challenging and very well written.

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[> PS I love the description of the lettuce, the cucumber and the tomato...particularly the recurrence of the tomato throughout the poem -- tim, 13:38:33 05/25/01 Fri

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[> [> oh yeah i think i forgot to say how much i loved the description of the lettuce, the cucumber and the cherry tomato too :) -- zeina, 13:40:38 05/25/01 Fri

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