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Date Posted: 19:33:14 05/26/01 Sat
Author: tim
Subject: I think the was I wrong could be a truning point and indeed the "best part" of the poem, perhaps if it was the only rhyming couplet, or if it was one of only a few. Makes thing stand out. Overall the poem is playful, which I am not sure it is intended to be?
In reply to: luke 's message, "Not finished and not likely to be" on 17:37:06 04/02/01 Mon


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[> I like the idea, and the rhyming helps to show us that there is a bit of a fun side to the poem, despite its potentially macabre undertones. Makes for interesting reading, though I think the rhyming is best used reservedly, to mark turning points in the poem perhaps?? PS congrats on the poetry win! -- tim, 19:36:51 05/26/01 Sat

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