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Date Posted: 16:52:16 03/27/01 Tue
Author: james
Subject: the description and detail here is what really makes this. "the tiny ridges in the sand" and I also love the "tinkling of the shells." I like how the calm, observational style changes to the breathless, panic in the final paragraph. Its nice to see that you add swimming techniques to even your writing. Water on the brain?
In reply to: maggie 's message, "The Power of the Sea" on 14:07:45 03/21/01 Wed


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[> I agree with these comments. I think 'immense immediate' is quite funny actually. Why can't you survey a view? -- luke, 13:03:29 03/31/01 Sat

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[> [> because it's a style crime. -- si, 11:53:10 04/01/01 Sun

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