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Date Posted: 15:38:15 04/21/01 Sat
Author: Luke
Subject: I like this more than your last two. The description is cleat and full. A couple of the "but"s annoy me like in "old but poud and smart." I think it would be better to actuaaly say what was unusual about the way his eyes are large since I can't quite imagine.
In reply to: meg 's message, "The Dog" on 12:32:13 04/06/01 Fri


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[> being picky an odd: i dont like black and white photo which shows red hunting jacket. i thought at first maybe it added a personal level to the piece but decided in the end i didn't like it. i do like the desciptions of the dog being kind of nasty and i like the way it ends again on 'his name was prince' .... ooooh and i LOVE the roaring fire backdrop :) -- zeina, 19:14:28 04/25/01 Wed

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