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Date Posted: 14:58:46 05/30/07 Wed
Author: Marcelo
Subject: Peer Edditing to Marianna Muzzi

Dear Mariana, thank you for your analyse. Congratulations for your task. I think you got the point. Your thesis statement is clear and related with the body of your text. I will use your text to improve mine.In the last line of your paragraph in the sentence "in order it make it easier", you could avoid one pronoun "it". I think your conclusion can be improve.But it is ok,I am not able to find more mistakes, the person appropriate is Adriana, Congratulations and thanks

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