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Subject: Moonsilk & Willow (Sonnet)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 03:25:34 10/05/07 Fri

Moonsilk & Willow


Beside cool water streaming, moon hath kissed,
to quench her thirst this season of rebirth.
In poetry I’ve found no sweeter tryst,
than that of ancient willow born of earth.

Moonsilk, it drapes so tender to each leaf,
as truth, Her whispered secrets fall as night.
I call the moon before the 'tween time thief,
makes haste to raise the sun to his great height.

Our mother moon She hangs so lovely there,
whilst gracing nature, beaming all the while.
Oh how Her beauty kissed my spirit bare,
so perfectly enough to make me smile.

As silk of moon now bathes the landscape stark,
this poet’s ink will pour my sacred mark



© Sasha ‘07


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[> Subject: Re: Moonsilk & Willow (Sonnet)


Author:
andy spaschak
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Date Posted: 06:16:01 10/06/07 Sat



Our mother moon She hangs so lovely there,
whilst gracing nature, beaming all the while.
Oh how Her beauty kissed my spirit bare,
so perfectly enough to make me smile.

As silk of moon now bathes the landscape stark,
this poet’s ink will pour my sacred mark

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I am the man on the Moon so you could imagine
how much I enjoyed this.

..........and the couplet Queen strikes again!


do da do da

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[> [> Subject: Re: Moonsilk & Willow (Sonnet)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 08:08:48 10/06/07 Sat



~ thanks heaps, Andz....

I'm so pleased that you found this one enjoyable, hon
thank you soo much for taking a moment with this one

*kiwi hugs*

Sash xx

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[> Subject: Re: Moonsilk & Willow (Sonnet)


Author:
kristen.
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Date Posted: 18:42:58 01/07/08 Mon

sash, your sonnets just blow me away. reading your sonnets always makes me wanna try... and then i remember how hard it is and how talented you are!

grrrreat stuff.

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[> Subject: Re: Moonsilk & Willow (Sonnet)


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 19:22:06 01/07/08 Mon

Sash,

Some of the discussions we had over sonnets were amusing, others thought provoking, but the upshot was that you nailed it big time! Loving the way you transfered your voice to this form. You always amaze me,

Love and hugs,

Paul.

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