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Subject: Re: 3 in 1 Short Form Challenge

Author:
Sasha

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Date Posted: 14:42:59 12/19/07 Wed
In reply to: Sasha 's message, "3 in 1 Short Form Challenge" on 18:58:11 12/07/07 Fri

~ oh and I'm totally with Lily on that one!!!!

it's just so awesome to have you here, Kristy girl

love ya

*hugs*

Sash xx

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Author:
Jess
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Date Posted: 11:57:16 12/20/07 Thu

End of the begining by =Omardxb on deviant ART

I traffic in desertion.
In endless shading of umber-
Shadow plays with no
participants but me,
no stage, no curtain, no love.

Thirsty for words, my throat
thatched with promises I've broken,
dragging chains with half-hearted teeth
marks, my heart smudged, sullied.

I'm cobbling my excuses, the
only participant, the
waste, simile for my soul. "

I always have such a hard time with the syllable restrictions....my submission is sub-par, but on the plus, I got to reread the oeuvre that came before me! Lovely, ladies!
Jess

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