Re: 3 in 1 Short Form Challenge -- Poetry Challenge Court

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Subject: Re: 3 in 1 Short Form Challenge

Author:
Sasha

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Date Posted: 14:46:11 12/22/07 Sat
In reply to: Sasha 's message, "3 in 1 Short Form Challenge" on 18:58:11 12/07/07 Fri

~ Jess, hon, you are wonderful for even trying this challenge

I didn't realize until I did it myself how hard this one was

but hey, we all challenged ourselves to the max with this one..lol

we can all be proud to get through it...

and syllable count or not, your poem rocks!!!

Quote:
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Thirsty for words, my throat
thatched with promises I've broken,
dragging chains with half-hearted teeth
marks, my heart smudged, sullied.
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I love that!!!!

thanks for joining in, sweet one

*hugs*

Sash xx

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