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Subject: The Lone Hunter


Author:
J-DuB
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Date Posted: 19:50:52 12/26/07 Wed




The Lone Hunter


Silently, stalks the wolf
in hope to catch his prey.
The flesh he tears,
the bones he will crush,
to fill his stomach today.


He returns to his den
like always, alone.
Every night he’d lie and wonder,
what’s left in this world
for the sad, lone hunter.




J-DuB

(aka Jesse Walker)



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[> Subject: Re: The Lone Hunter


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 01:19:36 12/28/07 Fri

Jesse,

I have long recognised that you have extreme talent in your life.Your art, your music and your natural talent for humour all shine, now you add poetry to the list and I can honestly say that this is a stunning piece, that impressed me greatly, What a star you are!

Peace and love,

Paul.

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[> Subject: Re: The Lone Hunter


Author:
tcn
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Date Posted: 08:45:30 12/28/07 Fri

I love the feel of this poem, you really capture the spirit of the lone wolf well and you portray that theme so effortlessly in your poem. Excellent work! Great talent here.

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[> Subject: Re: The Lone Hunter


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 19:19:48 12/28/07 Fri




~ hey Jess, I'm so glad you decided to write a poem for this forum

and I'm so proud of the job you've done

and ya know what that means don't you? You have to write more now..lol

you're my favourite 12 year old boy he he ;)

little cuddles BIIIIG CUDDLES little cuddles BIIIIG CUDDLES hahahahaha

love you

your mum xxx


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[> Subject: Re: The Lone Hunter


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 23:05:46 01/02/08 Wed

LOL!

Look at Kiwi Momma getting all mushy!

Jesse,

You're one talented boy.
I just love that you wrote about wolves.
Someday when you are old enough I'll
send you my wolf poem.

I'm glad your Mom put this room up.
I'm hoping you pen a few more poems for us
but, keep on playing that guitar too.
It was great to hear you last week.

"No Woman no Cry"

Unfortunately, no woman no kisses either!

..........and I know you are on the move
these days looking to become
the Auckland heartbreaker.

Write ON, Rock ON!

Let your spirit sail the skies.

Your buddy,
andy

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[> Subject: Re: The Lone Hunter


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Andy
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Date Posted: 18:33:26 01/04/08 Fri




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It's so wonderful to see this piece in the spotlight of the Muse Mongers Mantel!!!


CONGRATULATIONS, Jesse....so very deserving!!!!


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[> Subject: Re: The Lone Hunter


Author:
AnneMarie
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Date Posted: 07:48:55 01/10/08 Thu

All I can say is WOW~You truly are amazing!
Please, please post more. Big CONGRATS and hugs.

AnneMarie

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[> Subject: Re: The Lone Hunter


Author:
J-DuB
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Date Posted: 13:42:53 01/20/08 Sun




Thanks guys, for all your wonderful comments

I can't think of anything else to say he he

so, thank you all

and l8az (laterz)


J-DuB

(Jesse)



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