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Subject: Re: Somewhere In The World


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Gemini
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Date Posted: 04:34:35 07/13/02 Sat
In reply to: Nicholas Murray (age 8) 's message, "Somewhere In The World" on 13:45:32 07/07/02 Sun

P.S.
Meant to say I liked the way you contrasted ordinary, everyday events with the suffering in the last two lines.
Much good poetry is contrasted this way.
gem.


>Someone is playing play station2
>Someone is doing a washing
>Someone is playing outside in the rain
>Someone is praying or wishing
>Someone is riding their skateboard
>Someone is out there horse-riding
>Someone is reading a book
>Some Mother somewhere is tidying
>
>Someone is cutting the grass
>Someone somewhere is sleeping
>Someone´s dad is building a shed
>Someone´s baby is weeping
>Someone somewhere is angry
>Someone is in a hurry
>Some poor children somewhere
>are even more than hungry
>
>Nicholas Murray
>age 8

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