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Subject: Re: Somewhere In The World


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Raphaela
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Date Posted: 09:58:17 07/16/02 Tue
In reply to: Nicholas Murray (age 8) 's message, "Somewhere In The World" on 13:45:32 07/07/02 Sun

I first read this over at Writers Write and was so impressed that I invited you to Unicorn, where the talent speaks for itself.

This poem reminds of the busy world we live in and where we often forget others that go hungry as well as suffer such things children shouldn't have to face.

This has a lot of depth to it and is very meaningful - I would love to see more of your poems and stories here.

Raphaela




>Someone is playing play station2
>Someone is doing a washing
>Someone is playing outside in the rain
>Someone is praying or wishing
>Someone is riding their skateboard
>Someone is out there horse-riding
>Someone is reading a book
>Some Mother somewhere is tidying
>
>Someone is cutting the grass
>Someone somewhere is sleeping
>Someone´s dad is building a shed
>Someone´s baby is weeping
>Someone somewhere is angry
>Someone is in a hurry
>Some poor children somewhere
>are even more than hungry
>
>Nicholas Murray
>age 8

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